A very well presented group treatment. The separate presentation for your treatment as a handout to help make your concept visual and clear was a very good idea (though consider explaining this is what you have done on your blog). You have thought about how to communicate your idea, as well as the necessary detail. In future consider the order of your presentation, going into detail after covering the basic outline. But otherwise well done. Also consider combining your two posts (extra titled ‘group treatment for music video continued’ ) into one post, or adding introduction explaining the second post. Finally you must title to post treatment and list your group members.
A very well presented group treatment. The separate presentation for your treatment as a handout to help make your concept visual and clear was a very good idea (though consider explaining this is what you have done on your blog). You have thought about how to communicate your idea, as well as the necessary detail. In future consider the order of your presentation, going into detail after covering the basic outline. But otherwise well done. Also consider combining your two posts (extra titled ‘group treatment for music video continued’ ) into one post, or adding introduction explaining the second post. Finally you must title to post treatment and list your group members.
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