Tuesday, 12 September 2017

Early Feedback

I received the following feedback to these pitches:

Alt-j  -  House of The Rising Sun

- It is risky to rely on movement of the sun to shoot time-lapses and scenes in the forest, since the sunlight is very limited in January and winter weather forecasts are unreliable. 

- The number of locations should be reduced


Brothers on The Slide 

- Locate the band and the fighting ring on the same studio to save time on the filming day

- Develop on the capoeira idea to make it more abstract



The Fade Out Line 

- Depict the characters' fears more abstractly. This will reduce the number of required locations and make the video more artistic.

- Think of the set design that would reflect the atmosphere best







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